In some countries, young people leave home as soon as they finish school. Is this a good or bad thing?
The young generation is considered as the backbone for the country's development. Nowadays, leaving home at early ages immediately after finishing high school education is becoming increasingly popular in some nation. I believe this is a positive development for young people as well as for the country.
To begin with, today's teenagers decide to live far away from their families, as this assists them to enhance their self-confidence, as well as they, become more independent. For instance, in the US there is a trend on attaining the age of nearly 17 people leave their home for further studies or for searching jobs. At this age, young people meet with several challenges and opportunities outside their comfort zone that help them to go the extra mile in order to accomplish their goal, results in boost their belief in oneself.
Furthermore, the young generation now becomes more responsible and a decision-maker as they have to manage their budget on their own and also make the fruitful decision for their life's goal. For example, in India, people who live far away from their home, engage in various activities of earning for their survival. This assists them not only to be a good citizen but also contribute positively towards the nation.
However, there are certain challenges also, as people at this age easily become the prey of criminal activities. To illustrate, indulging themselves for consuming drugs, alcohol and conduct mischief for little temptation etc.
To sum up, despite having some negative impact, this step is entirely appropriate. I believe that an independent and responsible person is the pillar for the growth of family and society which is ultimately a positive development for entire country.
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- In some countries young people leave home as soon as they finish school Is this a good or bad thing 78
- Should education and health care be free of charge and funded by the government or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services Discuss the above and give your opinion with an example 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...duct mischief for little temptation etc. To sum up, despite having some negative ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21785714286 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85756916462 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596428571429 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2508561862 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.384615385 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199929167022 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793278084572 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496499668049 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119069140564 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810549860729 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.