In some countries,some people are renting accommodation ,while others are buying their own homke .Does renting accommodation have more advantages or more disadvantagesthan buying a place?
Although certain individiuals prefer to rent house, others go for purchasing their own place of residence. From my perspective, I firmly believe that renting a house attract more problems compared to the benefits it might bring by procuring a residential place.
To begin with, finalizing a rented place for living could apparantly bring loss of wealth. This is absolutely because of paying a handsome amount of an individual’s income to the owner every month instead of paying them against the loan amount if finalized for newer home. To examplify, from the numbers of Ministry of Housing , 90 % of the tenants in urban areas have applied for home loan because monthly installments are almost equal to rent paid.
In addition, renting a house does not allow a person to live a stable social life. Owing to strick government rules, the tenant has to go on changing the neighbour contineously by changing the residential address. Not only elders but also the juvenils could not built stronger relationship with the surrounding ambience due to lack of prolong time at any single rented house.
However, staying in a rented house has minor benefits, too. It can assist the tenent to receive a suitable place to survive for a short period of time whitout spening a huge sum of money. For instance,a employer staying alone out of city, due to professional committements for a fixed period, might be the best option to stay rather than building a separate residence.
In conclusion, the essay depicts that squander of huge amount of salary and deterioration of societal relationship far outweighs the positive aspect of incurring small amount of cash by renting a house on short term basis over purchasing a personal edifice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1461.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12631578947 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87909473025 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642105263158 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9425133727 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15002518926 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607059162266 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525019645173 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849065559111 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645797079361 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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