In order to cope with the highly challenging environment, employers try to be in touch with their staff around the clock irrespective of holidays. Even though this development helps employers to serve better for their clients, but it affects the work-life balance of the employees drastically. This process might have some positive outcomes but it cannot overweigh the negative effects it brings.
Serving around the clock maintains the reputation of an employer in front of their clients. Employers in return try to extract as much as possible from their staff. Workers who are available twenty-four hours a day including holidays are applauded with hikes and other privileges which inspire other co-workers to follow such path. Recently in a renowned IT company, the bonus is provided to employees based on the number of extra hours they worked apart from normal hours. These are the advantages which prove this development is beneficial to employers and employees too.
A person working 24 hours a day without a holiday cannot remain normal. Employees get lured by the fact that hikes and promotions will be given to them if they remain available all day including holidays too. This stress and the inhuman process can cause serious health issues to an employee. For example, most of the middle-aged corporate employees are suffering from obesity and depression. Though such working hours may get you promotion and hikes, but it will affect health seriously and this development obviously have more disadvantages.
To conclude, employers nowadays expecting their employees to be online throughout the day which include holidays too. This may profit employees at one time but it will definitely affect the balance between office and personal space of the employees in the long run. Finally, this development can have some advantages but it can never outweigh the disadvantages it provides among the workers.
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:•thank them for the photos and for the holiday•explain why you didn't write ea 73
- Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines.Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages? 61
- Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays.Does this development have more disadvantages than advantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'companies'?
Suggestion: companies
...ow such path. Recently in a renowned IT company, the bonus is provided to employees bas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27213114754 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75773764235 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.470787973 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252265122603 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824074281101 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06313298908 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163206845127 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619049010292 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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