Nowadays some employers want to be in contact with their employees no matters when and where they are in order to smooth-running relationships. This essay is going to discuss possible positives and drawbacks of these development.
First and foremost, it is extremely important to keep in touch in certain jobs. For example, a doctor is very a demanding and rewarding profession. Doctors such as surgeons should always be available to call because in emergency situations only they can save one or several lives. Besides, politicians are responsible for the laws and for the countries on the whole. If one day, for instance, a president didn't answer the call there would be serious problems in domestic or foreign policy.
Despite the advantages of being constantly on-line, there are some disadvantages. Even though so many workers deprive their family of family gatherings in order to work harder, sometimes employers disturb their staff even on holidays, thus individuals should spend even more time on their jobs. This overworking could lead to health risks and other related issues. Unhappy workforce can be a burden for huge organisations and damage it significantly. For instance, employee might be irritated or unsatisfied by his job and seek for a new one because of endless calls of his boss, literally scarcity of vacation.
Ultimately, this development have advantages as well as disadvantages but it is very difficult to compare them. There are some professions which involve necessarily every day and night connection. Those ones that do not, should be moderated due to attention of emploeyrs to their employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'these developments'?
Suggestion: this development; these developments
...uss possible positives and drawbacks of these development. First and foremost, it is extremely...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
.... If one day, for instance, a president didnt answer the call there would be serious ...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'Those' instead.
Suggestion: Those
...ssarily every day and night connection. Those ones that do not, should be moderated due to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28846153846 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01517611132 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.881358001 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27153248781 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718825397492 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738024065315 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157519208307 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777266934078 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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