The graphs depict what UK graduated and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
It can clearly be seen that amount of graduate students much more then number of postgraduate students. Overall, part-time work is the most popular destination excluding full-time work and further study.
As is presented in the first diagram, the number of students who decided to go to further study is 26,955 and it takes huge difference in comparison with 3,500 students who devoted their time voluntary work in 2008. We can see that approximately 26,000 students more preferred to keep studying instead of voluntary work. It is obvious that part time work and unemployment are resembled with 17,735 and 16,235 respectively.
First of all, the rating of destinations in the second bar diagram quite similar as it was in the previous: further study the most popular between postgraduate students and voluntary work is the less demanded destination with 2,725 and 345 respectively. However, the difference between part-time work and unemployment have sharply increasing; nearly 1,000 more students decided to work instead of wasting of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...t amount of graduate students much more then number of postgraduate students. Overal...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...d of voluntary work. It is obvious that part time work and unemployment are resembled wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31550802139 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88003538033 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2832196512 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30851244386 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155402889774 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170504668726 0.0843802449381 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251685348076 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198380797378 0.0819641961636 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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