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Dear Sir/Madam,
my name is Ifeoluwa aransiola, and I reside at 5A Ogunaike street, Magodo, Kosofe local government area. I am writing to notify you of the untidy state of my street, after the recently concluded public event- which led to an unpleasant sight and a general foul smell in my neighbourhood.
I must commend all your contributions towards improving the living condition of the residents in the local government area. However, I have observed a general dirtiness of the street, due to not cleaning up after the recently concluded Eyo Festival. The whole street was littered with empty bottles, leftover foods, untrashed disposable plates, nylons ,spoons and so on.
This challenge has resulted in an eyesore and a strong unpleasant odour in the environment. As you will agree, these waste items could allow breeding of germs- leading to breakout of airborne diseases.
Based on the foregoing, I would suggest you assist in communicating with the committee for the carnival, to organise cleaning of my street immediately. Also, I recommend that the government should encourage all future events committee to ensure the area is cleaned up, after any event is held.
I look forward to a favourable response from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Ifeoluwa aransiola
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... event- which led to an unpleasant sight and a general foul smell in my neighbour...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the street, due to not cleaning up after the recently concluded Eyo Festival. The...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ods, untrashed disposable plates, nylons ,spoons and so on. This challenge has ...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
... government should encourage all future events committee to ensure the area is cleaned...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35294117647 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90902359919 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671568627451 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0055781235 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2727272727 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.020260845995 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00800167426867 0.084324248473 9% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0132839124155 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.010897648236 0.151304729494 7% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0091515375063 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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