Children have great learning capabilities in childhood. Mind is in developing phase in childhood. Craftwork, music and languages are the enables creativity in one's mind. Learning a foreign language enhances the brain. Usually juveniles learn foreign languages in secondary school which is also reasonably great practice but specialists believe that learning such a verbal skill can be wonderfully helpful if young one's learn it in their primary school.
Some research proves that mind is mainly divided in two sections handling different activity in our body. One section stimulates the creativity and nurtures behavior while other section defines the mathematical logics and understandings. Creative section can be utilized by performing different creative actions which is challenging to the individual and logical section can be activated by solve some logical puzzles like mathematics and reasoning.
On the other hand their are some disadvantages of learning foreign languages at some young age. It is hard to manage time between schools, Home work and playtime. Offsprings get very little time left for playtime. Childhood is a blessing and is very important time for a child. If children are burdened with extra learnings then it would be hard to get desired playtime for them. This is the time when they see the world in very innocent stress-free way. As the child grow, he learns to manage time and it would be little less harsh to ask to learn a new language.
No doubt there are advantages of learning a new language but disadvantages outweigh them so it is better if do not mess up with their schedule and ovrburden them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, while, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84217336702 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9335194114 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282061677622 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819831701648 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893177166329 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157697521781 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894072812283 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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