some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. which of these two school policies do you think is better? use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
it is vital that the school uniform is a distinctive symbol that could represent the school for people in this day and age. that is why some high schools establish their own rules about what students put on to school, while others allow students wear casual which they can dress in their own style. From my perspective, there are three reasons that students should attire uniform in terms of equality and similarity.
First and foremost, a dress code could represent the school which standardize. For instance, being a member of a prestigious school would be an honor for a student as it justifies their efforts to get into their dream school. this can help to build responsibility and respect among students inside and outside. Thus, wearing the uniform would be an admiration and remind them that they are wearing the school uniform, they should think carefully before acting.
Secondly, wearing uniforms take shape the equality between students at schools. To be specific, some students cannot afford to buy new clothes or costly price, on the contrary, some can spend a lot of money to purchase higher priced and better quality clothes to wear to school. these directly impact students by separating the groups, some students who wore the old outfit might be isolated from classy students. Furthermore, they will feel unconfident about their poverty, thereby creating conflicts between rich students and poor students, even leading to school violence. Hence, the equality built by wearing uniform is essential.
Last but not least, these day students become more concerned about their appearance. One option clothing will force them to concentrate on studying and learning rather than worrying about their wardrobe. To illustrate, studies in the UK have proved schools that apply uniforms as compulsory rules have 75% higher grades than others. Consequently, student will have a better learning atmosphere at school with no tension of appearance.
In conclusion, uniform makes great contributions to better school life, helping students enhance our abilities to pay attention and giving them a sense of equality. For all these reasons, students should wear uniform to school.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28080229226 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60192430682 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573065902579 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4558668907 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.388888889 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44955094087 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151505964521 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933569437708 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282406122199 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809609937009 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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