Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Kids love toys. Toys are more than fun and games for kids. Although, some parents buy variety of toys for their children while there is some negative aspects with benefits. I will discuss both negative and positive aspects about having a lot of toys.
On one hand, playing with a lot of toys have benefits for toddlers or younger when they are not given all toys in one time providing that giving them 5 different toys in one time and other 5 different toys on next time of playing. It enhances their knowledge and creativity. For example, toys with different colour and shape helps them understand variety of colour and shapes of objects. Furthermore, it increase their self-pride when they play with a puzzle and solve it on its own. In addition, if they play with dolls they can create a sense of relationship with other people and develops emotions.
On the other hand, playing with a lot of toys can reduce their mental ability to create new ideas. A research in which toddlers expose to two situation, one with large number of toys and another with few toys. The children with variety of toys seems to be less creative and confuse by having a great number of toys, they do not know what to do with them. On the contrary, children with few toys create new ideas to play with same toys. Moreover, children who play with more toys develop an entitlement and do not have much feelings for others because they get what they want. More often that kind of children have less problem solving minds and do not want to waste their time in puzzle solving and building blocks. It is so that, they have other choices to play with. In that case their knowledge and creativity downs.
In conclusion, playing with great number of toys increase their mental health and sense of morality if they given specific toys at specific time and vice versa.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63414634146 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26132387404 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47256097561 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6192821798 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435331312016 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141101261795 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874843450451 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270560839966 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610590045208 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.