Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having many toys
Purchasing numerous toys for a youngster is a hobby of some fathers and mothers, hence, the enormous toy quantity. While this abundance of playthings might facilitate creativity of the young adult, it might also cause addiction.
Being creative could be a benefit of possessing many toys, especially the engineering ones. This is because the child can develop several ideas simply by merging these items. The majority of the young generation actually began their career development by playfully constructing plastic vehicles and structures, but never did they know. As the children process increasing number of playful facilities, they tend to experiment new notions and probably yield more positive results. So, the more access they have to plenty toys, the more their creativity, since it develops their brain capacity.
Despite this advantage, the children's increasing number of gaming equipment also negatively affects their brain by making them addictive. Following the research conducted by the Nigerian Health Organisation in 2009 on addiction, they emphatically warned the young ones against excessive usage of gaming facilities because of the possibility of brain problem. That is a kind of mental issue that develops primarily due to an individual's excessive focus on a particular hobby. Just as nicotine is a peril to heavy smokers' brain, playing with a large number of toys is also dangerous to the children's mental health. Evidently, if they continue to have many toys , they may become addicted to it.
In conclusion, having numerous playthings can help the children to develop different creative ideas such as building houses, but it may also play a negative role in their lives by becoming addicts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, may, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43494423792 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82492336956 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624535315985 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4254006505 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.461538462 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259766963611 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850934828725 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757790921847 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142158065239 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322007736636 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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