Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?
Nowadays a lot of adults pumper their children buying and allowing to do them everything without limitation. This essay will first discuss about problems of such method of parenting and it will then address the question of how this kind of bringing up can influence to behavior in the future.
This way to grow up children is not right. Yang people who have everything what they want become selfish and spoilt. They do not recognize the value of money and do not have dreams and wishes, which they are supposed to achieve themself. For example my sister`s son used to have what he wished, his mother has always pampered him, so now he got used to having things without efforts. he has boring life without wishes to do something. With regards to the question of consequences this type of raising, I suppose it may have negative results. The vast majority children may be spoilt, impolite and depend on their parents all their life. Such people often do not respect adults and their relative as well, because in general if all your life new things appeare without efforts you should not work hard in order to reach their goals. For instance recent research from "Life style" magazine shows us that 92% of kids with this type parenting are not success in the future as a consequence do not have prestige job and do not satisfy their life.
In conclusion, it is not right to raise kids giving and allowing them everything, however the better way is encouraging and giving them opportunities to achieve their purposes and then they more likely will be happy and success in the following time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: doing
...mper their children buying and allowing to do them everything without limitation. Thi...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... used to having things without efforts. he has boring life without wishes to do so...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...job and do not satisfy their life. In conclusion, it is not right to raise ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79136690647 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48510130215 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1644480136 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370616833926 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128095167786 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647716843463 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207639810729 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942055203749 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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