Some parents think children should have mobile phones, others disagree.
✔️Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Cellphone has been vitally important today, allowing many people to hooked on this particular device and there are people who hold the view that utilizing of this mobile phone has brought the children to use it purposely. Although it has perceived a behavioral distraction toward juveniles in an early age, Most parents has allowed this technological device to use by their young child; however, it has implied merits which enables to often communicate with them and security is another reason for this.
The asserting of the mobile phone is quite impressive to use since it has some implication to children for two reasons: security and communication. First of all, known for its usage, mobile phone can save a child's life in times of calamity. Simply they put phone into their pocket all the time, so that when disaster strikes, they will contact authorities, or the parents will get in touched with them. According to the World in Health Organization (WHO), digital phones are tremendously helpful tool that is mostly used in tragedy caused by earthquake, flood and fire. Furthermore, having connected to phone application to more futures job opportunity. For instance, LinkedIn is an online portal application, linking people to socially interactive while they showcase their talents to future prospect employers.
Despite this, however, it has learned a negative impact that recognize as a behavioral distraction, letting a child to lose focused on social development, and it has reported some issues such as hyperactivity, whining and sulking. Having resulted to unhealthy habit, this can lead them to addiction which name as technology interference.
In conclusion, mobile phone is advancing today, as it carry outs the pros and cons of using this tool by children but I believe in its useful advantages and not its drawback.
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- Some parents think children should have mobile phones, others disagree.✔️Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23728813559 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87985205021 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7790033069 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.454545455 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879580707092 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367611482422 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028405745331 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0537832526509 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104281675171 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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