Some parents think children should have mobile phone others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
Advent of state-of-the-art technologies changed life of people in numerous ways. Some parents are of the view that having mobile phones are necessary for children whereas others hold the view that this is an unwanted thing which may mislead them.This essay is an attempt to evaluates both sides of this argument and gives a concluding view.
The valid reason of parents who support the ownership of mobile phones is that, they can communicate with their kids as and when needed, especially in emergency situations. Since parents are always busy with their work schedule this is the only way to get in touch with their children while they are in work place. Besides, children can refer internet when they are doing their research works or assignments. Thus it would be better if children have mobile phone with them.
Some parents, on the contrary, strongly argue that, having a cell phone by the children is of no use. Over use of this gadget may mislead their offsprings from academics to some antisocial activities. Because they do not have much time to overlook their children. Furthermore, even though this device offer some support while doing homeworks, over exploitation of this may lead to certain health issues in the foreseeable future. Therefore, it is better if children do not have cellphones which encourage them to spend time studying and participating in extracurricular activities at school.
In conclusion, however people have different opinion about use of mobile phone by children, in my opinion it is good if children do not use mobile phones as it has harmful effects on their health.
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- Some parents think children should have mobile phone others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 61
- Some parents think children should have mobile phone others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 61
- Many of the medical problems that people are experiencing in today's world are due to the fact that we have a sedentary lifestyle. To what extent do you agree? 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0977443609 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74324830676 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5156983402 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287953988987 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105158288192 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835164816133 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185877240394 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508670935827 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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