Some people think that art is the essential subject for the children at the school. while other think it is waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
In modern world skills like art is essential for pupils in their overall development. According to some people, art should be compulsory at the school subjects while
others criticize this and declared a time-wasting activity. I am going to explain both views in details and then I will conclude.
As I mentioned earlier that art is important for children's growth, which brings umpteen of advantages. first of all, It develops skills in the kids. They
learn many arts in school such as painting, crafting, drawing and so on. As a result, these additional activities open up future doors of opportunities in terms of job,
particular profession. However, In the past parents were not aware and they never allowed their kids into these activities, today's generation is more aware and
motivates their children to enroll in such classes regularly. Secondly, kids find hidden talents from art and they are building their carrier in art. Nowadays,
not only the government promotes art, but it also providing the platform to individuals to build the future. As a result, they organize competitions in every city.
In contrast, some narrow-minded still think that it is a waste of time and they do not allow their kids to enroll in art classes. parents are so fearful
about taking any risk. These risks can be afraid of losing focus from their studies and can end up with losing future job carrier. If students focus more on art classes then they do not show their interest in the main subjects and they can take back sheat in studies. next, In this busy pace of life earning money is the uphill task for the parents.
If they permission for classes, their financial system can be disturbed and have to struggle financially. As such, it can also affect their children's studies too.
In conclusion, In the new era, Extra activities like art is part and partial of life. I am strongly in favour of art and the government should also promote this on a big level.
In modern world skills like art is essential for pupils in their overall development. According to some people, art shold be compelcery in the school subjects while
others critise this and declaired as a time wasting activity. I am going to explain both views in details and then i will reach at conclusion.
As I mentioned earlier that art is important for children growth, which brings umpteen of advantages. first of all, It develop an addational skills in the kids. They
learn many arts in school such as painting, crafting, drawing and so on. As a result, these addational activities open up future doors of opportunities in term of job,
particular profession. However, In the past parents were not aware and they never allowed their kids into these activities, todays generation are more aware and
motivate their chidren to enroll in such classes on regular basis. Secondly, kids find hidden telents from art and they are building their carrier in art. Now a days,
not only government promote art but also providing the plateform to indivuduals to build future. As a results, they organise compititions in every cities.
In contrast, some of narrow minded still think that it is waste of time and they do not allow their kids to enroll in art classes. Basically, these parents are so fearful
to taking any risk. These risk can be afried of loosing focus from their studies and can be end up with loosing future job carrier. If, students focus more on art classes
then they do not show their interst in main subjects and they can take back sheat in studies. next, In this busy pace of life earning mony is uphill task for the parents.
If they pemission for classes, their financial system can be distrubed and have to struggle with financialy. As such, it can also effect their children studies too.
In conclusion, In new era, Extra activities like art is part and parcial of the life. I am strongly in favor of art and government sdould also promote this on big level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85755813953 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53402848545 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4957743964 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.55 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189886100632 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551602298351 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653683967596 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721249675572 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628925796894 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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