Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times. They
dont want their children to read entertainment books becuase they think it is a waste of time.
Do you agree/ DIsagree with their opinion?
Some parents expect their children to read-only academic books every time. They think that reading magazines or newspaper is a waste of time and children ought to use this time in reading their course books. In my opinion, I do not agree with the statement, as reading varieties of books apart from educational help children to create a holistic development.
To begin with, one benefit with reading different entertainment books is a positive effect on their mental health. Reading comics and magazines help them to know on varieties of general things which expands their imagination thinking and generates creative ideas. For example, according to a recent survey, 38% of children who read magazines twice a week were more creative than others who only read academic books. Another point to consider is that, if children are encouraged to read about different sports and their favorite stars, it encourages them to play sports, helping them to avoid a sedentary lifestyle and make be active and healthy. Therefore, reading about different varieties of books apart from academics exposes creative ideas in children and motivate them to involve in an active lifestyle, helping to create an overall development.
Having said that, there are some benefits to children reading only academic books. Their attention is not diverted from studies, which helps them to score better grades. For example, according to a recent poll, 45% of children who read educational books all times not only performed better in practical exams but also scored good marks in theory exams. But if parents guide properly and help them to divide proper time for both the subjects, children reading different
subjects can also score equally well.
In conclusion, reading different books on varieties of subjects help pupils to think innovatively and encourage them to involve in an active lifestyle; thereby, creating their overall development.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32131147541 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63324618822 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6218578902 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.846153846 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40537363556 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18185192126 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990729945842 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236465518324 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170243898083 0.056905535591 299% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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