Some parents, who stay at home instead of working think they need to be compensated by the
government.
Do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with relevant examples.
Currently, with this globalize word people can travel any country and reach their goals easily, specially in their working field. However, some believe that this will lead to children's suffering because of there are no friends for them to be with. In this essay I totally agree that people should move from country to another to get a better life for their families. This essay will discuss both points of views.
It is clear that most of the time there are better jobs in other countries with good salary and more benefits where you live now. Moving such a country will develop his or her future not only that but also their family since they can directly interact with people who have better life style, knowledge and education. For example children can learn multiple languages and cultural in their young age and it will improve their education and brain development as well.
However, losing their friends, family, specially grandparents and comfort zone at a same time for a child is hard to deal with because they are still not interacting with social. Furthermore, children will feel loneliness in their own world and lead to some health issues like depression. But with this new technology, Skype, Viber and Facebook we can make children to communicate with their grandparents, friends until they use to their new life on other country.
While there are many benefits of moving country to find jobs, still have some negative effects for children. Besides using right methods we can prevents those issues and make this new life event a grate beginning for all.
- Some people think that children would benefit if they attend nursery school before primary school while some people think that children should stay all day with their families. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 67
- You recently lost your driving license and somebody found it and returned it back to you. Write a letter thanking that person. Explain1) Why the license is important to you?2) Ask few questions how did he or she found it, and3) Thank them. 73
- Your friend is looking for a new job. Write a letter to him referring a new job. Include the following: 1) Describe the details of the job? 2) Why is it suitable for him? 3) How to apply for the job? 73
- Some parents, who stay at home instead of working think they need to be compensated by thegovernment.Do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with relevant examples. 61
- You couldn't find a book you need to read in your local area shops. Write a letter to shop owner in another town to enquire about the book. Include the following: 1) Give the details of book you need 2) Why you need it? 3) How will you pay for it? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: prevent
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93984962406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34329674372 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1651718683 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0991197790269 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407612160465 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0307517308153 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0622935167922 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283777945202 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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