Some people argue that capital punishment is good for a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some that the death penalty benefits a nation. I completely agree with this
opinion and in this essay I will state the reasons for my view.
The most compelling reason for holding to my view is that the death penalty is an effective
deterrent to serious crime. This is because it instils fear of carrying out serious crimes as
people would not want to lose their life as a result of that. For example, people who are
thinking of murder or committing violent acts will think twice before doing so. As a result of
this policy, crime rate would go down.
Another reason for my position is that the government will be able to spend less money on
keeping the criminal in prison. If the criminal is jailed for many years or for life, the
government would need to pay for the enormous expenses involved such as the cost of food
for the prisoners and the salaries for the prison officers. However, with the death sentence, the
prisoner will spend less time in prison and this would reduce the cost of imprisonment
substantially.
Lastly, with capital punishment, the dangerous criminal would never be able to reoffend. The
reason for this is that executed criminals will no longer be alive and therefore they will never
pose a threat to society ever again. This would make society a safer place.
In conclusion, I totally agree with the opinion that sentencing serious criminals to death is
beneficial for countries. This is because of its deterrent effect, its ability to save the
government a lot of money and the fact that we can keep dangerous criminals out of society
forever. Given this situation, it is recommended that governments around the world should
think about implementing this form of punishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, lastly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8762541806 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55846066319 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52508361204 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2245847292 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123070398375 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462773062482 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439731316918 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0401962606948 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406104297858 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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