Some people argue that a growing number of young people spend too much time in watching TV. Why does this phenomenon happen? And what kinds of activities should be encouraged to them?
Time, spent by the youth of present generation, watching TV programs is being criticized by many. From pre-school kids to young adults are found to be addicted to setellite channels as they get limited access to outdoor activities. This essay will discuss the relatin between TV addiction and scope limitation of outdoor sports as well as the effect of encouraging sports to improve the present scenario.
The practice of staying in front of TVs for a long time started with the reduction of opportunities for outdoor activities. Firstly, neighbourhoods all over the world are densely populated that the society can hardly ensure playfields for the dwellers. As a consequence, the children are left with no option to play that involves physical labor but to stay indoor. Secondly, parents are highly concerned about the companions their offspring accept because of the increasing number of teen-crimes. In USA, for instance, 193 crimes were being reported in 2018 where a gang of teenagers were involved coming from good families. Being concerned about their son's future, a father finds it safer to motivate him to stay inside than get involved in outside world. Here again, the person is left with the easiest solution of watching TV. It can be said that, if a reason is keeping someone at home, it surely is promoting the person to enjoy tv programs.
However, to overcome the addiction of sitting infront of TV, some measures can be ensured by the guardians. As the playfields are limited in living areas, schools authorities have to play a key-role by making spors attractive to the enrolled students by continuously organizing sport events and conducting practice sessions. Though it might take long to transform the television watchers to active athlets, both the teachers and the parents have to provide frequent support to the students. Moreover, indoor stadiums can also compensate for the lack of playfields as this is possible to organize sports in such places at minimum cost. Not only that, such stadiums offer experienced coaches to train the young minds become physically fit. Once someone is attached to such places, they have less time to pass time watching TVs.
To conclude, the hours spent infront of TV has increased globally.Lack of outdoor activities have forced the youth to stay at home and watch TV. To reduce the negative effect of such phenomenon, it is high time to promote sports among the young generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2054.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10945273632 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73346866532 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572139303483 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.111111111 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155750053616 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476704831828 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401113605629 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104616220215 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293302261968 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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