Some people argue that sports are essential for us. Others think of sports as an activity for leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sports have existed in our lives forever. It is usually considered as an activity to spend some free time, however, others argue that sports are crucial. This essay will discuss both views further in detail and explain my reasons to support the former view.
Sport enthusiasts have varied reasons to support their argument. It, definitely, teach the importance of team building, improves leadership skills and of course helps to stay physically fit. These learnings not only help individuals in various aspects of their present lives, but also are useful in dealing with future endeavors. For instance, in India athletes are always given first preference for a government job opening owing to their abilities of handling situation on the playground. The more serious the sport becomes, the more importance it will gain.
On the contrary, others completely oppose the necessity of sport in a regular life. They feel that sports is a way of passing the leisure time. From playing golf to badminton or games like table tennis and basket ball, all are considered as a means of time-lapse. Especially, for the rich people winning a game of squash in a club is not considered an achievement but a well-spent Sunday brunch. Thus, in most scenarios, a sports event may play a role of entertainment rather than a serious venture.
In conclusion, although sports provide a lot of life lessons not only to keep humans healthy, but also to teach morale and values, it somewhere lacks to gain the importance in their daily routine. So most people, including me, would always consider it a past-time activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...nday brunch. Thus, in most scenarios, a sports event may play a role of entertainment ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, of course, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04150943396 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70217664725 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649056603774 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1865649191 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300343666557 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885618434778 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727531322961 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167382139904 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096319241487 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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