Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing?
It is considered by some people that attaining popularity at the early age is advantageous, while others think that it has got only detrimental effects. This essay will highlight the disadvantages of becoming a well-known person at the younger age.
To begin with, many young artists, sports personal and athletes need to spend huge amount of time in performing their rehearsals and as a result they hardly find time to attain the primary education at school. Furthermore, some may not even appear in a single class per week or on their final exams. Without a base education, they will highly lack a basic quality as a child or a discipline. For instance, A recent survey conducted in United states revealed that 60% of the young celebrities who failed to pass Grade V are struggling in one to one interview as their foundation was not rigid enough.
Secondly, Young talents are grown up in an atmosphere by facing huge amount of money and fame which in turn makes them to believe they are superior to others. Most importantly, some kids are not showing respect towards elders including their parents. In addition, because of their one-on monetary support makes them as a prey to indulge in anti-social activities like illegal contact with druggists, smoking especially liquor consumption and their entire life will be in vain. An apt illustration is famous pop specialist Michael Jackson became very popular at early stage but spoilt his career by using contaminated drugs.
To conclude, I strongly believe that it is not ideal to let young people to taste the popularity at a very early age in life since it will school education and certain principles of life are highly obstructed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96830985915 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76512943378 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644366197183 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8599512674 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.272727273 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174899981616 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634767206182 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527604982014 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11716736519 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602825649832 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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