Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
knowledge and experience are the two sides of the same coin. one cannot gain a particular skill without a basic understanding. some people prefer enhancing their awareness field while others tend to work for it to increase their communication part. In my opinion, both the things go hand in hand and I shall explain my views in the following paragraphs.
Undoubtedly, education plays a vital role in shaping an individual and preparing for future endeavours. but what astonishes here is the fact that generally people consider leaving behind their higher study for earning money.While some join coachings for a particular type of exam or migrates abroad to level up their existing knowledge. This not only broadens the horizons of the human being but also makes them more self confident about themselves.
The flip side of the coin displays a complete different picture. Research shows that the dropout ratio of learners have inflated over the past fer years. As soon as they attain a particular age, they start looking for job no matter what is in their bag. For example, many pupils do not consider studying a Master’s degree and are adamant for pursuing jobs after their Bachelors only.This,in turn, puts a strain on the companies and hence, many become jobless even after receiving the highest education.
From my perspective, one should not get influenced by the prevailing conditions. In fact, they should work on their own betterment first before going on with the norms of society.
To conclude, youngsters who believe in themselves and their best interests would make the best decisions of their life. Nevertheless, a good country is the product of such talents and their hardwork whether it is inside the boundaries of knowledge or surpassing the work field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, while, for example, in fact, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11683848797 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79912886458 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0078782236 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145609695599 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395990412675 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406550919023 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722068893446 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368160824869 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.