Often at times, it is perceived by few that to succeed at a sport one requires gifted ability, on the other hand, there are many who thinks that giving daily attention and hard work can make one successful in this area. In this essay, I am going to discuss both of the viewpoints and will also provide my opinion that why both sides are significant for one to succeed.
Some people think that one should be abiding skills from their childhood to master in a sport. This gives a person a special situation where he can excel in the sport without giving a significant amount of effort. For example, Roger Federer who is World’s number one basketball player, he aces the game by basketing a ball from mid-ground of the court, thanks to his exceptional height and an excellent physique. He is about 6’5” tall, and his height comes very handily as none of the opponents is a match for him and this gives him a very good advantage as no one can obstruct him.
However, there are many who admires that hard work and regular effort to pursue a sport plays major role in defining one’s success. For instance, Anne Williams, who is six-time Formula – 1 World Champion, during one of a press interview, revealed that the credit of her achievement goes to the numerous hours she spent on practice. She mentioned that she used to spend 12 hours a day for 9 continuous years on race tracks and when weather conditions were not in favour she leveraged technology to simulate race conditions.
All in all, I am motivated by a famous quote, “Practice makes a man perfect”. Hence, I firmly believe that to be on top of a field be it a sport or anything else one does require natural skills but regular practice and a tremendous amount of hard work are also equally important.
- Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than others sources such as internet and tv. to what extent do you agree or disagree. 11
- Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need a natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "requires gifted" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'gifting' or 'to be gifted'.
Suggestion: gifting; to be gifted
...that to succeed at a sport one requires gifted ability, on the other hand, there are m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6572327044 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69693462112 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603773584906 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.8215930843 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.636363636 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9090909091 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220817361885 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859005402826 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742472228828 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13581788699 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693064740426 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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