Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over speed is one of the greatest cause of accidents, but there are several causes are also responsible for the occurring of such accidents. Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets and roads is to lower the speed limit, but this could not only rectify the problem. People must have to be aware during riding, specially on city streets because firstly city streets seems to be more conjusted than city roads and secondly, more street activities performed by public.

According to my opine, in order to improve the safety on city streets, speed breakers at regular intervals should be provided and specially at more happening places. There should be proper setbacks on streets, no coverage or built up area should be towards roads, streets should be smooth, without any patches and every rider must have to wear helmets for their own safety. Because in India, majorly people died due to road accidents.

Straight roads should be more preferable, at junctions of streets speed limit should be minimized, children should not play on city streets, and most of the above people must not have to allowed their children for vehicles before the age of 18. In the night, there should be street lights on city streets along with CCTV's cameras. Vehicles should be properly parked because road parking is also a major cause of accidents.

Due to increasing rates of accidents on roads and streets, govt. now has made strict rules and increased the Callahan's price manifolds. Before the amendments of these regulations, people seems to drive recklessly and specially the drunken one's. But now due to high Callahan's people have become more attentive, caring and protective.

According to my opine, heavy loaded vehicles should be banned on city streets, speed limit of vehicles on city streets should be fixed, and vehicles should be allowed by parents only after a good training. By implementation of such ideas, probability of street accidents could be minimized.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07294832827 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51306946767 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498480243161 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.020749647 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.266666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233243953243 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919789998958 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106783815119 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144452519222 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918806931672 0.056905535591 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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