One of the major problems that found today’s government is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing population whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
There is continuous increase in the population. Thus, the demands for building more houses are being necessity. Thus, government is facing many obstacles to cope up with this issue. It is true that necessity is the mother of invention thus as it means our needs make new ways to invent things. In this essay, I shall discuss both the statements.
Let us throw some light on the first opinion about building new houses. First of all, in this conventional world, everywhere there is congestion. So, the prime reason is devoid of space. Technology lends a helping hand to create sky scrapers. Consequently, there are requirements of money as it is well known fact that money makes the mare go which means money run the things. Secondly, a good architecture is crucial due to cope up with natural disasters as earthquakes. Because the height of sky scrapers are too high. Additionally, huge material and the garbage of making buildings required to be to proper dispose. Moreover, the quality is the base of a building. If the material is not good then it makes a huge disaster for several people who live there.
Now, let us elaborate the other view to try to save the environment. Governments and the other organisation are giving supportive hands to preserve the greenary. It becomes a burning question thesedays. To begin with, the prime measure is to grow more trees. So the atmosphere gives pleasant and fresh air. Secondly, to find out the better solution to convert garbage into energy. For example, in Italy and Denmark, large number of garbage is changed into electricity. Next, due to congestion of more houses and road construction, the space for outside activities is declined. Hence, more parks and playgrounds are made. In the modern houses, the uses of wood material is reduced specifically trying to stop deforestration.
Hammering the final nail, it can be concluded that some preventions are better to save environment and to fulfil the raising demands. In my point of view, people should choose the sky-scrapers and use recycled products that never spoil anything in the ecosystem.
- Some people believe that the best way to spend a holiday in a foreign country is to go out to meet people instead of staying in the hotel most of the time what is your opinion give reasons and include relevant examples from your own experience 11
- Some people believe that the best way to spend a holiday in a foreign country is to go out to meet people instead of staying in the hotel most of the time what is your opinion give reasons and include relevant examples from your own experience 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with natural disasters as earthquakes. Because the height of sky scrapers are too high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, first of all, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 383.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07832898172 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8555089049 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603133159269 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 16.0721442886 180% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8036225711 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0689655172 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2068965517 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86206896552 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790970930025 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0183741660172 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342445290489 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043505697965 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217040560389 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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