The trend of giving birth to child at more mature age, after 30, is commonly observed among majority of people. The only demerit of this raising trend is age factor; however, in my perspective, its merits are far more in terms of financial support for better take care of their children and parents have enough life experience.
The primitive drawback of late parenting is the age limit. Owing to the fact that more age of women is considered as a weak point to give birth to a child, there are various changes takes place in women’s body after 30 which impact on the stages of pregnancy. Therefore, the population of new generation will be declined. To cite an example, a survey conducted by health Organization in the USA, in 2016, revealed that in America 80% women were faced pregnancy complications after the older age.
Nevertheless, maturity among the parents is crucial to fulfil their young’s needs. This is because, at the older age, both parents are well settled and earn enough money to support their family, they are able to plan for children, and at this stage parents have relaxation from the burden of settle-down and to be career-oriented; resultantly, a well earning parents will give better education to the child, for their future development.
Besides money needs, life experience is considered as the other vital factor for the decision of late child birth. Since mother and father have faced different situations in their life time, they become knowledgeable, or they learnt so many lessons from their failures and can apply this for their better life. Hence, not only parents are acquired information for their development, but also they will give better lifestyle and lessons to their offspring. For instance, had my friend Carol, not got the good earning job for her better life to settle down in Toronto, she could not have good opportunity to give better learning atmosphere for her child in home.
In conclusion, while the only disadvantage of children at matures age is raising changes in the women’s body. I am convinced that its benefits supersede the drawback.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...parents have enough life experience. The primitive drawback of late parenting is...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ave faced different situations in their life time, they become knowledgeable, or they lea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00568181818 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70273048344 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548295454545 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.2567514667 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172789652884 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617559241568 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511558996926 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108319531966 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370850328153 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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