Some people believe that building unattractive houses should be prohibited because they are exposed to the public. What is your opinion about this?
It is irrefutable to say, with the inflation in the architect business there has been burgeoned in the influence of architect in building making process. The involvement has resulted in some of the masterpiece in the architecture of the housing business and theres debate between people whether unattractive building should be prohibitted or having a beautiful bulding. In this following essay i will be discussing both the views on the matter ofexterior of building.
To begin with, the exterioor of the bulding is the first thing people notice and they start judging others. Having a elegant, beautiful exterior attracts colossal people and it feels happy when one praised the beauty of the house. For instance, according to New York Times around 70% of people want the look of the building to be sophisticated as it gives positive vibes to them and they can maintain the prestige in thje society.
However, people on the other side of the fence assert that , concerning only about the exetior beauty is not enough, as it is said never judge abook by its cover. A house might not architecturally sound but it might have a beautiful inside with fully furnished and sleek designs, and the gravitating toward the bautiful desin is relatively a new thing, rather housed used to be simple back in the days.
To recapitulate, with the influence of architect in the design process they produce a sleek and propitious design. However it is ergerious to judge any house by its exterior design as it might be the best interior and one need not to feel inferior by the design of the building.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8962962963 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75542248037 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9378928555 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.2 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222049232834 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810485376963 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066889974845 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12492482559 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626800745909 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.