Some people believe that children are given too much freetime. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
certain people in this society believe that children have more free time for doing different kinds of activities other than studying. They say that time should only be utilized for academic works. In my opinion, I say that effective spending of free time for both studying and other activities, would be better.
On the one hand, considering the free hours after school time for doing different sort of things such as playing games, going for shopping and spending tie with parents makes children happier and reduces the stresses from academic burden. Due to the hectic load of syllabus, they are being forced study more while at school, so again coming back to home repeating the same will affect their mentality. For instance, The Hindu newspaper recently reported that over 80 percent of students studying 10 hours in private schools and home are being affected with personality development problems.
On the other hand, it is also cardinal that getting higher marks in examinations rely on studying hours. In order for to get a high result in schools, children have to concentrate on their textbooks after getting in home. For example, A successful student who awarded first rank in all India 10th standard examination claimed that he had given 12 hours in a full day for revision and training on subjects he was studied, that made him achieve the higher results. Hence, it is evident that considering time for to study at home is also needed to get secured good marks.
In conclusion, it is important that doing homework after and revision along with refreshing activities are essential in equal manner. This will help them to advance in their academic profile and stress relief.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Certain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01418439716 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49513383861 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606382978723 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1993860674 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257256432022 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958907501599 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073857170948 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154996926356 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966919524936 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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