Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time
NOWADAYS, leisure time HAS BECOME THE UTMOST CONCERN OF MAJORITY OF parents. A GROUP OF them THINK THAT THEIR wards should spend THESE hours BY INDULGING IN studies RATHER THAN SITTING IDLE OR having FUN.I BELIEVE THERE should BE A PROPER BALANCE BETWEEN THEIR EDUCATION AND leisure OWING TO A NEUTRAL LIFE.
ON one hand, EXTRA CURICULAR activities play A CRUCIAL ROLE IN THE GROWTH OF some significant SKILLS WHICH CANNOT BE ACHIEVED BY studying. OUTDOOR games such AS BASKETBALL,FOOTBALL EMBARKS QUALITIES OF SPORTSMANSHIP, LEADERSHIP OR TEAMWORK AMONGST THE PLAYERS. WHEREAS, INDOOR games FOR example CHESS BOOSTS THE CONCENTRATION OF THE STUDENTS. IN ADDITION TO this, leisure activities PROVIDE WIDE OPPORTUNITY TO PUPILS TO learn, PRACTICE AND MAY BE OPT THE DESIRED sport AS THEIR FUTURE GOAL. SACHIN TENDULKAR is one OF THE GREATEST examples OF such INSTANCES.
ON THE OTHER hand, IN my POINT OF VIEW EXCESSIVE USE OF ANYTHING is HARMFUL. THEREFORE, LIMITATION TO free time should BE one OF THE VITAL RULE TO TAKE IN CONSIDERATION. parents should ASSIGN some significant AMOUNT OF hours AS play time FOR THEIR wards AND have A keen OBSERVATION ON IT. A CAREFUL AND SMARTER way OF UTILISATION OF free time can LEAD TO POSITIVE results. AS A result OF this, THEIR wards WILL ALSO learn THE ART OF time MANAGEMENT.FOR example,2 OR 3 hours A DAY should BE ALLOTED FOR some KIND OF sport OR activity BUT AT THE SAME time A keen OBSERVATION should BE KEPT ON THE TYPE OF leisure.
TO SUM UP, IN my PERSPECTIVE CHILDREN NEED SOMETIME TO RELAX FROM THEIR REGULAR SCHOOL WORK. PRODUCTIVE ways OF spending THEIR free time ALONGWITH ENJOYMENT can BE AN INEVITABLE way TO ERADICATE THEIR PRESSURE FROM studies AS WELL AS RELIEVE them.
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... ON THE TYPE OF leisure. TO SUM UP, IN my PERSPECTIVE CHILDREN NEED SOMETIME...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9590443686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85062015146 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.975398603 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.785714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336640088712 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996009574238 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778101742741 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186140146098 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938843648783 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.