Many people believe that children have so much leisure time than their study hours. Although some people think that given spare time should be utilize in academic work, I feel, it is necessary for kid's development and other activities and it should not be used for study.
Children spend long hours as schools or universities also they get lot of homework. Therefore, it is injustice to ask for to do their assignment in the few free hours they get. In my view, children who are spending more hours on study they may become introvert person and find difficulty in other cultural and sports activities. I am completely disagree with this and think kids must use spare time to do other activities instead of academic work.
Conversely, I think students should utilize their free time in such activities they enjoy. Some research have evidence that physically active people are healthier than who are not. So parents should encourage their children to play outdoor game with their friends. Which helps them to maintain their physical health and they get some time to relax. Also, children should do some cultural activities which is beneficial for creativity.
To conclude, getting engaged in activity other than study is helps to improve physical and mental health. Also it helps pupils to gain knowledge from different area other than academic. I think parents should allow their children to use free moments in their own way that would be great for their better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'utilized'?
Suggestion: utilized
...e think that given spare time should be utilize in academic work, I feel, it is necessa...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... and sports activities. I am completely disagree with this and think kids must use spare...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... to improve physical and mental health. Also it helps pupils to gain knowledge from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, if, may, so, therefore, i feel, i think, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98780487805 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43840439274 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5314324483 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466724729608 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15681741731 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925331661864 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292380920552 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913679596268 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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