The pie chart displays what students of a university decided to do after completing their graduation in the Anthropology degree course, while the tabular data provides information about salaries of anthropologists in different kinds of employment over a period of five years.
Overall, it’s clearly seen from the pie chart that almost a third of the total graduates are associated with some kind of jobs and a significant amount of students are pursuing higher studies. Also, graduates who are working as freelance consultants and are in the government sector received a good amount of annual salary compared to those who chose jobs in private companies.
After graduation, above half of the students decided to do full-time work and 15% of the total graduates are doing part-time work. However, a significant (13%) amount of students opted to do postgraduate study, from which 8% are concentrated on the full-time study, while others did get a part-time job. A significant amount of graduates (12%) are unemployed. Also, it is unknown what remaining students decided to do.
After five years, salary after five years of job experience is above $75,000 in the majority of the cases. 40% of freelance consultants and 50% of government employees received more than $100,000, while only 30% in private companies received above this amount. A little amount (5%) of employees from freelance and government sectors and 10% of private sector employees earned between twenty-five to fifty thousand per year. Almost a third of private workers and 15% form the other sectors each earnt $50,000 to $75,000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, third, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 257.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21011673152 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84699425913 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540856031128 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1626764796 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.727272727 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195282387975 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751982919304 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704499019506 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129252378839 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673343261052 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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