Some people believe that children s leisure activities must be educational otherwise they are a complete waste of time Do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience

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...tive side.First and foremost ,education activities enable children to incline b...
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...d foremost ,education activities enable children to incline brain acuity. To dem...
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... that makes it mandatory for toy makers to incorporate some learning skills in...
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...rs to incorporate some learning skills in every toy they sell and thus it wil...
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...e way.Apart from it, lavish task require active participation of parents and tea...
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...ipation of parents and teaching methods to accomplish them.To elaborate, puzzle...
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...ing activities are terrific for holistic development of pupils.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78928571429 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33269020156 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689285714286 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.347304513 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 180.111111111 106.682146367 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1111111111 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 56.0 5.01903807615 1116% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16355338713 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613291159859 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291012668811 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962351213451 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174796616075 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.63 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.89 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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