Spending leisure time is good.but it maybe not good when we can't find to make something.time is important for all people.but I think it's most important for students.
When we the students find some time,we should make the best use of this time.so,we can do any good deeds.there is two types of work,good work and wrong work.good work means those work that can make us refresh.such as making some craft,drawing,reading,cooking,and whatever you want.and the wrong work that I mean,the wasting of valuable time in those work which can't help us in any side.
So I think cooking,drawing,reading is educational purpose.but I would love to say that spend leisure time is for refreshment,and remove the dullness.so parents and teachers must'nt force the student saying that you can't waste your time where you can't find any types of facilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e is good.but it maybe not good when we cant find to make something.time is importan...
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Line 2, column 36, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...ts. When we the students find some time,we should make the best use of this time.s...
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Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...should make the best use of this time.so,we can do any good deeds.there is two type...
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Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , good
...ny good deeds.there is two types of work,good work and wrong work.good work means tho...
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Line 2, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , drawing
...ake us refresh.such as making some craft,drawing,reading,cooking,and whatever you want.a...
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Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cooking
...uch as making some craft,drawing,reading,cooking,and whatever you want.and the wrong wor...
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Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... you want.and the wrong work that I mean,the wasting of valuable time in those work...
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Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he wrong work that I mean,the wasting of valuable time in those work which cant h...
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Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...g of valuable time in those work which cant help us in any side. So I think cookin...
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Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , drawing
...help us in any side. So I think cooking,drawing,reading is educational purpose.but I wo...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...at spend leisure time is for refreshment,and remove the dullness.so parents and teac...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: mustn't
...ve the dullness.so parents and teachers mustnt force the student saying that you cant ...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ustnt force the student saying that you cant waste your time where you cant find any...
^^^^
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...that you cant waste your time where you cant find any types of facilities.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so, i mean, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 1615.20841683 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 137.0 315.596192385 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10948905109 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.94498368376 2.80592935109 141% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 176.041082164 48% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 506.74238477 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.642153549 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 233.333333333 106.682146367 219% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.6666666667 20.7667163134 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149411238164 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106140846338 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446134465065 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106140846338 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446134465065 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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