Some people believe that children should go to extra classes after school. Others, however, think that children should spend that time playing instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is important to consider how a student's extra time after school should be managed. While some assert that it should be spent on sports activities, whereas others believe, this time should be consumed in tuition classes. I agree with the latter view considering academic success in increasing competition.
On the one hand, those who consider playing is quintessential for spending leisure time after school, believe that this involvement is necessary for the overall development of a student. This is because, indulgence in physical activities makes the child physically and psychologically active, which further enhance the concentration and learning power, as a result, the student performs excellently in studies. To illustrate, a psychological study by the Indian Medical Science on the students studying in the Mentally Challenged Schools, has proved that regular physical sports can increase the learning abilities of a student to a greater extent. In contrast, if students will not involve in such events, this can make them lethargic and inactive, consequently, they get prone to various health issues.
On the other hand, some people think that extra study sessions are vital for academic success and to compete in competitions, and I fully support this notion. With these classes, an extra syllabus can be covered which can help in scoring high marks in board exams. Additionally, a one-to-one discussion can be done with students, which can solve their problems and in-efficiencies. For instance, in every branch of Delhi Public School, daily one-hour tuition class is conducted by the school authorities for all levels, this makes the students proficient in studies and also it leaves a less burden of homework on them. Alternatively, if there is no availability of additional study classes, this might lead to poor grades of students in exams and also hindering their career growth.
In conclusion, although playing in recreational time is important in terms of physical and mental health of students, in my opinion, extra academic sessions are far more essential for achieving heights in this competitive world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
It is important to consider how a students extra time after school should be manag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4371257485 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99772225195 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586826347305 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.0791661642 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.692307692 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149122332061 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592089088719 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626002781629 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100255060809 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056068713564 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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