Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
People have different views about the children having homework from school. Though it is argued that they should not be occupied everyday for the assignments, I believe that it’s an effective way to gain enormous achievements at school.
Having homework regularly would not allow them to enjoy spare time. They have to busy with studying after the daily school timetable which could pose a mental health issue. A recent survey shows that in Bangladesh 20% of younger suffer from cognitive health issues because they are too busy in studying to relax. At the same time, it deters children from energetic activities such as sports, which lead them a sedentary lifestyle. Thus, doing homework every day reduce the children’s relax time and increase psychological issues.
However, despite doing homework has the above negative effects on children; I would argue that it is essential for successful learning at school. The assessment of homework helps to keep young students stay in the class. In order to complete homework they have to stay attentive in the class because without concentration they might unable to aware about lessons. In addition, the regular feedback of teachers about assignments determines the improvements and weakness of learners. This could helpful to create an effective study plan of learners, and keep them engage for recovering to have an expected score. A recent TEDTALK shows that the good scorer children in exams are usually conscious about the homework. Therefore, getting homework every day is a way of achieving significant results at school.
In conclusion, while doing homework might be challenging for children, in my view it is fundamental to enhance their exam placements in the school.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...argued that they should not be occupied everyday for the assignments, I believe that it&...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32246376812 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76927995482 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.8901367252 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293622847593 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981110541842 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766026405117 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181483443759 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378310067671 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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