Some people believe that a country becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures. Do you agree or disagree?
A mixture of different nationalities in the globalization era has become a wide-spread tendency in the modern world. While some people seem to find only positive moments in this tendency, others, as well as me, do not support this claim which will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, most developed countries are not multicultural whereas developing countries, in general, consist of many nationalities and ethnic minorities. Also, some minority nationalities do not accept any adaptation to the local country's lifestyle and even tend to deny their traditions. For instance, some ethnic minorities aim to live in very enclosed communities, their children, generally, do not attend schools. As a result, the amount of jobless people in these communities occurs to be extremely high as well as crime level such as participation in drugs spreading and involving their children for that. Finally, every cultural mixing tends to lead to the domination of one culture and the extinction of others. For instance, the protection of ethnics minorities has become a burning issue for many countries nowadays.
Speaking about the opponent's opinion, first of all, some people believe that a mix of different nationalities may be like a breath of fresh air for some nations and present new ways for further development. As an example of this phenomenon may be when settled Chinese shared the technology of paper production, spreading this skill all over the world. However, it seems to be possible without any mixture of other nationalities.
All in all, despite the view that the more nationalities in one country the better, I tend to find more negative facts in this phenomenon, which cannot be ignored.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'opponents'' or 'opponent's'?
Suggestion: opponents'; opponent's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in general, speaking about, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23272727273 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01286278293 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.803766872 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0833333333 7.06120827912 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218093503025 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776135849212 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506612626822 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127402746492 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160344918437 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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