Some people believe that economic growth of any country reduces poverty and hunger while other think that it causes damage to the environment. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Economic growth is essential to measure a country's progress. Some people think that growth of a country's economy diminishes poverty and hunger, while some believe that it results in hurting the environment. I believe, it is important to eliminate poverty and hunger through the economic growth of a nation.
On the one hand, a country's economic upturn increases local production of goods and services. Firstly, To produce goods, factories exhale harmful chemicals into the environment, which is not safe for human beings. Alternatively, government could step forward and impose strict laws to make use of renewable sources of energy and lessen release of harmful chemicals into the environment. Secondly, the increase in production requires human labor, who migrate to cities due to employment opportunities. This results in destroying trees to build houses to accommodate new immigrants, in turn damaging the ecosystem. This can be controlled by building taller buildings with many apartments inside.
On the other hand, a country's economic prosperity is a boon. First, it provides employment opportunities to indigenous people. Thus, a salaried person will be capable enough to take care of basic requirements like food, shelter and clothes. Furthermore, grocery stores will sell locally produced grains and food products. People could buy these produce, which are cheap due to no import fees. As a result, even a low wage individual could purchase food products. Additionally, government could build shelter homes for homeless people, and engage them in small-scale industry that produces shoes, belts etc. This way, everyone in the society is benefitted and there will be no poverty or hunger in that nation.
In conclusion, although there are some downsides of economic growth such as greenhouse gases and destruction of trees, which could be easily handled by making use of renewable sources of energy and taller building. The upsides of economic upturn are enormous like employment, cheap food products, shelter to homeless people thereby eliminating poverty and hunger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5015576324 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88828227053 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585669781931 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4170091179 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9473684211 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8947368421 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225873619565 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714762681189 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993144642176 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167892921884 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14530303485 0.056905535591 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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