Some people believe that elderly employees are more useful to a company while others believe that young employees are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The human resources of a company are always a significant reason for any company. Some people believe that senior employees are more beneficial for a company, whereas others believe that young employees are superior. Before putting any opinion, this essay will investigate both views.
One of the key reasons why elderly employees are more useful to a company is that aged staffs possibly rescue the company from difficult scenarios. Usually, old employees have vast work experience to face different sorts of tough scenarios. As a result, they are expected to know about the appropriate way to save the company from different problematic conditions. To illustrate, after the 2007 recession, Investec Investment Bank decided to keep at least one experienced employee in all of its portfolio management team because of their experience to tackle extreme economic conditions.
On the other hand, young employees will likely increase the efficiency of a company. In general, young employees are more dynamic and energetic, who is likely to be multi-tasker. Therefore, young employees will possibly complete tasks of multiple employees, increasing the efficiency of a company. For instance, in 2001, after Microsoft decided to reduce its average employees’ age by about 20.0%, the overall output of its human resources jumped by at least 25.0%.
In conclusion, although both types of employees are beneficial for a company, I strongly believe that young employees are more useful to a company because of their ability to boost up the productivity of a company. I work in an e-commerce company formed by some young entrepreneurs, which has the highest level of sales per employee among its peers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, whereas, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in general, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46641791045 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95766332303 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3048779651 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374134407067 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136017886073 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115162409237 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241736757802 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817970329701 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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