Some people believe that exploring outer space is important because it expands human knowledge and might lead to discoveries that will benefit humanity in the future. Other people believe that space exploration is a waste of money that could be better spent solving immediate problems here on Earth.
It is opined by a bunch of people that exploration of universe could be beneficial for discovering new things while other’s opinion cannot be disavowed that instead of doing expenditure on outer space the existing problems should be tackled with first. This essay brings forth my opinion as how problems like pollution and over-crowding are increasing by leaps and bounds and should be dealt with immediately.
The paramount reason of why hurdles which come along the way of development should be considered first is manifold increase in pollution. Whether it is air pollution or any other type of pollution it is caused due numerous reasons which leads to health problems. The pecuniary resources should be spent towards betterment of such problems. One of its best examples is that air pollution is causing a lot of lung problems which leads to people being admitted in hospitals. Now if this problem was tackled with, these people could have helped in advancement of the society instead of being a burden on the earth. This is how dealing with problem of pollution can make a big change in the surroundings.
Moreover, the count of people is increasing day by day which leads to problems like over-crowding and lack of space. Financial asset could be used to provide with better living options by developing affordable housing which covers less land. Due to limited availability of land people end up being in slum areas which leads to poor living standards. It can be exemplified by the fact as stated in ‘Times of India’ that 60% of people in an anonymous city are living in slum areas which means they have limited availability of resources and could be of no help to the nation. This is how crowding of people leads to a major drawback.
To conclude, it can be said that even though in some people’s belief it is said that monetary resources should be spent on discovering outer space but problems like pollution and lack of space can only be solved when money is spent on these problems which would ultimately lead to development of the world across.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in some people’s belief it is said that monetary resources should be spent on di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86968838527 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7169280357 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504249291785 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.2642455693 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.785714286 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 7.06120827912 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210190014175 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813360249127 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054234451231 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145925098669 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269915280934 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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