It is often observed that the initial progress of a child depends on its surrounding, that environment impact the character and behavior in the future. Some have faith that is family who is responsible for these teachings, while others believe that other factors like friends, television, music and many more are affecting their thinking. In my opinion, however, there are several reasons to change a child's perspective but nothing can replace the family. In this essay, both forth mentioned views will be elaborated.
To embark with, the family probably are the first few persons a child interact with, at that delicate age the sense of right and wrong is provided only by the close ones in the family. Furthermore, the family members never think to provide bad habits or anything which could create any detrimental situation for a child, they always have a child's welfare in mind. However, they provide their experience and lessons to their young ones, so that they could learn something positive from those. In a recent piece of article by prominent " The Times", around sixty-seven percent of adolescents get success in life if their family is understanding and supporting them. Certainly, it also depicts a symbol of a happy family.
On the other hand, there are other sources like television, friends which influence the growth of children, although, initially the outcomes of these other factors can not be predicted, as they could be positive or negative. These constituents, have no intention to educate or to correct the child, the basic purpose is to depict the basic interest of their mind, which is now able to explore and experiments. In an empirical survey conducted by London's "Oxford University", which ascertained that about thirty-six percent of juveniles develop their mindset while they interact with others socially and if the interest is same like any activity sports, music or study it enhance their personality. Consequently, these components help a child to be civilized and mingle with the rest of society.
To conclude, it is inevitable that the other factors influence the child growth, yet the greater impact of the family is unparallel, that helps a child to take decision and stay strong in any situation of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 637, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...nts get success in life if their family is understanding and supporting them. Certainly, it also...
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Line 5, column 682, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
... any activity sports, music or study it enhance their personality. Consequently, these ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16531165312 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81906653184 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3534384486 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.142857143 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223443399215 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684229728545 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678826677596 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149359701421 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641020784728 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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