Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it causes problems. Do you agree or disagree?
it has been assumed by various individual's that engaging them self on work after the age of retirement can become the reasons of many issues. I agree with the statement because in that age the grabbing power of a person get very low and body become week which do not move properly.
In young age people's sense of understanding towards their college, client or employer has very strong. they easily understand the requirement of that particular person and give their best to fulfil the demand of that human, but as people are growing and converting in old age their power of grabbing get week and they do not even judge the things they want, sometimes which become the cause of conflicts among people. To illustrate, after the age of 55 supervisor always ask many questions related to the job which irritate the youngsters and create differences among employees. Therefore, due to some awkward behavior they may create violence at work place.
From the elderly point of view, their body do not allow to sit for longer hours due to the lack of proper nutrition. if they will continue their work after 60then it may become a reason of serious illness which can be non-curable like heart diseases, asthma, cancer and so on. Elders are like an eye of supervision at home if they will do jobs after 60 then their grand-children will deprived from their love and affection.
Conclusively, do jobs after a set age of retirement can create obstacles not in way of organization but also for themselves. so, stop working after 60 is a better idea.
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...working after 60 is a better idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85820895522 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61708448653 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9858217213 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.363636364 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243899313444 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930098985507 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303310535213 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146525205008 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315250259445 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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