Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory ob or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
Most of the people give up on their dream of bettering themselves and often settle for less than what they deserve, due to numerous reasons. Some justify this and thinks that it is the right thing to do in that situation. On the other hand, some argue that, whatever the reason may be, one has to be committed and have to try to better their condition. This essay will discuss both the arguments.
People try too hard to achieve their goals, but many of them often fail. Most of them quit, accepting their failure. There is a high probability for this kind of people to get depressed and some show suicidal tendencies as well. On the other hand, some aggressive people tend to go rogue against the society thinking that the community or the laws are not being fair to them and are preventing them to grow, and commit crimes, get imprisoned and destroy their lives in the process. For example, many immigrants in developed countries like the USA often offend the law and decline further in their life.
Despite any hiccups, some people never give up on their dreams. They stay strong believing that there is light at the end of the tunnel. For instance, Jack Ma, the founder of Alibaba, an online wholesale marketplace, was declined admission in 23 universities and is refused job by numerous employers. He never lost hope and eventually became successful. Successful people like these have some common features like risk everything attitude, self-motivating behaviour, and are ever ready to give up anything to achieve their goal.
In conclusion, we cannot control the situations that life throws at us but what we can do is, be strong and believe in ourselves and keep pushing till we achieve our goal. Giving up never made anyone any good.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Giving up never made anyone any good.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80463576159 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52100730461 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602649006623 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0410013783 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151751748286 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508637489355 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291730255245 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913856812996 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415365936547 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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