Some people believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
It is a general notion that seeking an advice from an old person is much more appropriate than to rely on opinions of youngsters. However, I personally disagree with this view. This essay will discuss my perspective further in detail.
To begin with, in this fast paced world it is customary to stay updated with current modifications. Youngsters today, with the help of internet and tech-savvy attitude, are able to achieve all the recent ongoing on their finger tips allowing them to analyze the situations promptly and provide a fruitful advice. Secondly, over the time, the intelligent quotient of an individual has drastically increased. People are now aware of lots of things which did not even existed in older days for instance, digital money. Therefore, in present scenario, consulting a young adult seems a wise decision as they acquire more knowledge in most areas.
On the other hand, it is no news that the vast majority of young people nowadays fail to understand the moral values. Undoubtedly, they require assistance of an elder parent or a grandparent to guide through such difficulties in life. However, most of the times the generation gap between the young and the old create more difficulties and misunderstandings rather than solving the issue. In such times asking help from a professional is a better option.
In addition, there are more than enough savants and psychological experts in the society to provide such guidance, rendering the necessity of older people obsolete. A recent study shows that more and more adults today are indulging in therapy sessions than ever before.
In conclusion, despite all the experience and knowledge that old people cater, their advice might not be much of a help in this turbulent society and thus, asking for advice from young people is better in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
It is a general notion that seeking an advice from an old person is much more appropr...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fruitful advice'.
Suggestion: fruitful advice
...yze the situations promptly and provide a fruitful advice. Secondly, over the time, the intellige...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09302325581 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81637451892 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58803986711 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2123082487 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238267332609 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712048160285 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734328635883 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138429833324 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861055900135 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.