Some people believe that it is better to get advice from old people compared to young people. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
All of us have witnessed triumphs and tribulations at some stage of our lives. While it is easy to throw a party and celebrate our victories with friends, taking advice is intricate. This essay agrees with the notation that elderly people provide better advice instead of young people because of their experience and patience.
Wisdom comes with experiences, so it is usually better to take an opinion about a serious matter from an experienced individual. In other words, adults have already been through numerous tough situations and most of the time humans face similar problems, therefore, the probability of getting effective advice is on the higher side if taken from an elderly person. For instance, when I was in a financial predicament, I asked my grandfather, Mr Prem Gir, about how should I tackle this matter? To my surprise, he had already faced such circumstances, in his life, so he told me his strategies to handle the dire situation and undoubtedly it worked out well for me. Thus, taking lessons from others who have been through similar situations can provide better solutions than youngsters.
In addition to this, during serious conversations, being patient is crucial in order to understand other’s viewpoint in depth. Whereas youngsters can give biased suggestions based upon their own version of the problem, elders, on the other hand, first patiently listens to a problem then analyse the severity of it along with advice seeker’s concerns eventually delivering an optimal piece of advice. For example, before taking tertiary education abroad, I talked to my father as well as my sister to clear some doubts. Compared to my sister, my father listened to me more attentively and taking into consideration of my opinion that resulted in a piece of better advice than my sister whom I thought understands me better. Hence, certainly, these abilities make adults better advisers.
To conclude, it is always better to take answers from elderly people who can understand advice seekers’ concerns and have demonstrated skills to tackle difficult situations as the advice can potentially make or break someone’s future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23699421965 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85659687007 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1613790371 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.428571429 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204633378688 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692244800993 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802366057778 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138245715241 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684804133748 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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