1. Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Gifts and presents are a token of love and affection to the loved one and family members. Several individuals agree that it is mandatory for people to give gifts to their family members and love ones to express their care, whereas, others believe that there are different ways to show their liking and concerns. In my opinion, I do believe that people can convey their affection and consideration in a plethora of different ways
Many citizens give their consent that the best way to express their warmth and sympathy for someone is by helping them both psychologically and financially as well as compassionately caring for them in their difficult times will have a deeper impact and will be treasured for life. Expensive gifts and presents have limited shelf life and do not symbolizes the true feeling. To elucidate, if a person who is in a big financial crisis, helping them monetarily and supporting them during his hardships is the best way to express the care and affection
However, some people believe that giving gifts is the most expressive way of showing their deep affection and fondness. As these things are tangible and will persistently remind them about the true feeling and sentiments. Moreover, to surprise someone on special occasion with the gift they need for a very long time will be appreciated and adored. To illustrate, if a child is gifted a bicycle on his birthday, he will remember and love that gift for lifetime.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that to help someone in difficult times or to take care and express the love to a person in need is the best way of expressing affection and true feeling, moreover it will be appreciated and remembered for entire life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8724137931 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73843693754 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496551724138 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.490415415 49.4020404114 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.0 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2222222222 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231735290376 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981547587137 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826366073639 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145975615797 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622794901804 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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