Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. DIscuss both views and give your opinion:
When it comes to giving gifts to loved ones, experts have split opinions. While some people believe that it is vital to give presents to near and dear ones to show our affection, others think that there are other superior options to show that we care. In my opinion, I think that there are better alternatives to display care than giving presents.
Discussing the view of people who support that giving gifts is crucial to show our affection for family and friends. The most compelling reason is gifts are important way of expressing intangible feelings. In other words, presents can act as a gesture of love and affection which sometimes cannot be exhibited via words or music. For example, according to a recent survey in western India, most of the people in the joint family believed that giving presents on important occasions to siblings helped them to express their affection and love. Thus, gifts act as a token of love and feelings for loved ones.
Focusing on the view of people that acknowledge that other alternatives are the better way to display care for family and friends. The most valid reason is financial support during the struggling period. To be more precise, helping hand during tough times by supporting financially can help other individuals come out of a difficult situation which makes him feel loved and wanted. For example, when a family friend is in a shortage of liquid funds and needs interest free money for a small duration, assisting him during that time displays the true affection of a person.
To conclude and put forward my opinion, I certainly favour the view that a helping hand, when needed and aiding in monetary terms than gifting presents, are better options to show care towards friends and family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94276094276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48452453793 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3970955426 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387596120017 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136262348344 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118262518543 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238717003035 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125678999398 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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