Some people believe that its not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
internet has changed the way of living of many people, still there is an arguement that life can be lived to its most without the help of this technogoly. In my opinion one can live like for the sake of living but cannot live life to its limits without the use of internet. Sciences' most useful invention has influenced humans life immensely and it can not be denied.
However, one can live life without taking the advanage of technology, but his life will be influced by its by products and convenience. Even though such life will be slow and disconnect from the world, with limited source and knowledge.
The biggest invention of human kind is the interent. Nowadays with the help of it people can communicate to long distance without wasting time, unlike the tarditional method of the communicating. Sharing of information is possible from one side of the world to the other side. Therefore humans are able to save time and invest it in more fruitful manner. For example, I can easily talk with my friend, who is staying miles away without having to travel for long hours and can invest the time in studing.
Furthermore, interent is huge source of information. All are able to benefit from the learnings and knowledge of each other. Resulting in awareness about various methods of vegetation, medicine and cure to illeness etc. For instance, I can search online the recepies of Thai cusines without have to travel to Thailand.
In Conclusion, in my opinion, one can live without internet but cannot thrive without it. The thought of human future without internet, itself is very scary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Internet
internet has changed the way of living of many p...
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Line 5, column 278, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ne side of the world to the other side. Therefore humans are able to save time and invest...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86813186813 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59338072461 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7743508982 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15010378984 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509956001785 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507183164271 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901692427675 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406730874045 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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