Some people believe that the libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the concurrent world it is undoubtedly true that books are important part of human life. some people think that libraries are wast of time and technological era computer replaced them so i am going to examine this question from both point of view.
One the one side there are so many benefits of libraries.firstly, library books content are authenticate by publication while computer content are not always true so people get right information from libraries. secondly old people can not able to use computer so they can prefer read books. thirdly, libraries are only place to read book in peaceful atmosphere and without loss consternation.
However point has two side the side of the subject could not be neglected so in technological era computers are best way for read book as well as save the money and resources for instance paper.nowadays people are more depended on practical knowledge so computer is best device for solve the our problems. In addition, computer save big data in less space and we can use computer any time and any place so it is useful for if any emergency.
As we have seen that there are no easy to answer to this question on balance. however i tend to believe that computer is more useful compare to the libraries because computer also decrease distance between two people so it is best way to connect the people. so my point of view computer is very needful device in faster life.
To be conclude, each coin has two side so libraries and computer both have own benefits. libraries are useful each age group of person who read any content while computer is give many different type of solution in one device but computer benefit are more compare to the library so i agree to computer replace libraries
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80794701987 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69886847723 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5686830177 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295017281252 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110936176352 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782140100818 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177282265192 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382631344761 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.