In today's time, knowledge is readily available through books or through computers. It is argued by many people that library which serves as the house of books is of no use and that computers are the modern day tool for increasing your understanding of a subject. There are others who do not believe it to be true. This essay will discuss both the views as well as my opinion of library being an indispensable part of an individual as well as society.
In the world of digitization, computers are used for mostly anything, ranging from searching a book or a content online to posting pictures or connecting with families and friends far and wide. Computers assist in finding any book based on title, topic or author's name faster as compared to scrolling through the shelves in the library. They provide tools to read it online as well. With online editors, the important sections can be bookmarked and highlighted too. Despite of it, spending long hours on a machine has adverse effects on our eyes and ultimately can worsen the overall body health. Long hours on computer can weaken our eyesight and eye muscles. Even the posture is spoiled when sitting at one place with our necks bending downwards. Recent studies showed that more and more people suffer from neck problems due to an increase in the hours spent with head down. Computer, though, aids in providing a vast resource of knowledge, it certainly has several ill affect on public health.
Libraries, not only, serve as a place to find relevant books from different publishers, but they also provide space to study in a peace and calm environment. Books, in general, have a less tiring effect on the eyes and are meant to satisfy human quest for knowledge. Large libraries are capable of accommodating many people at the same time and hence helps in saving electricity and resources that will be more when spend on one person per computer. Sitting in a like-minded people environment boosts focus and increases mindfulness. Even though, finding a book in library may take long, but the joy of scrolling through shelves is immeasurable.
To conclude, library are an important part of any society where people read and sit together under a roof. In my opinion, computers, though faster and better, have far more drawbacks on public health when compared to libraries. Therefore, Libraries should be promoted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, in general, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93266832918 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67172739074 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576059850374 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.305747368 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1904761905 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0952380952 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138657079987 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406710944319 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441937558917 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954394154696 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516571682879 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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