Living in big cities is a beautiful opportunity, but the motive and tax achievements of people defers. Some people believe living in big cities is becoming more difficult while others have the believe that it getting easier. In this essay I will discuss the both view and give my opinion.
On the one hand, big cities are usually known as a place with high level of opportunities and chances for people to explore in their areas of specialization. Many have experienced the growth that comes with living in big city. For instance, As a good fashion designer in the village who had the opportunity to travel to a big city for a holiday. During the holiday she had the chance to make awesome dresses for some persons in the big city. However the pay in the urban area is bigger and better than what she gets from people in the village. This designer will definitely prefer her life in the city than the village.
On the other hand, to survive in large urban areas has made many to sit-up in their daily activities. Due to the high level of living in big cities, house rents, school fees, feeding, transportation and so many other things are on the high side. Therefore individuals that struggles to survive on their own finds it difficult to adapt to this flamboyant life styles. For example, A graduate from a rural area whose vision is to migrate to the large urban area for tremendous change in finance but dose not have a anyone in the big city. Because of the high cost of living this individual will believe the live in the big city is difficult.
Conclusively, to live in lager places it is important for people to know their primary motives and their intentions to survival. Because in as much as life in the big cities are beautiful, the plans you have will guild you most times and enable you make right decisions towards your spends and expenditures.
In this essay is have discussed both views. However, my opinion is that living in the big cities is getting easier. Because, the life over there is modified and you get to see it in the lives of the occupant of the city. People do not talk anyhow or involve in matters that dose not concern them. People are well behaved no unwanted attitude or characters displayed. Are you in search a job? Big cities offer that plenty. As a person you just have to be very conscious in your day to day experience and live the life that matches you statuesque.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...dose not have a anyone in the big city. Because of the high cost of living this individ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 435.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56091954023 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47957011093 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468965517241 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7750619805 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396786244537 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113424700674 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133166137241 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25167201688 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.207142956885 0.056905535591 364% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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