Some people believe that media should be allowed to publish information about the private lives of famous people. Others say that everybody has a right to privacy and this practice must be controlled or even stopped. Discuss both views.
It is remarkable to see the powerful effect media has, not only on the lives of celebrities, but on their fan base as well. It follows, that a huge part of the media industry is keen on reporting daily routines of well established people, both with or without prior consent. In general, while some of the celebrities might approve of it, however, almost everyone will agree to safeguard their private life, and cite their right to privacy.
To begin with, inspiring stories are one of the cogent reasons why portraying the lives of famous personalities through a camera lens is highly sought-after. In most cases, not only do these media coverages give us a glimpse of the current success of the divas, but in addition, take us to their beginnings from a humble background. As a result, many of the followers are persuaded to follow their dreams and passions and aim to become equally successful. For instance, the daily coverage of one of the India's leading movie stars - Akshay Kumar has a massive follower-base. Besides, since the actor is highly respected for his strict regime and work ethics, seeing his daily routine on screen is quite inspirational to many.
However, on the other hand, having camera eyes incessantly invading the private space of famous people has extremely debilitating effects on their lives as well. As can be expected, celebrities are aware of the constant scrutiny of the cameras in their public appearances, yet even they want to safeguard their personal lives which indeed need to be kept away from others. For example, one of the most hurtful cases, is the death of Princess Diana's car crash in getting away from a paparazzi chase. Moreover, not only did the incident leave a bad taste for the media industry, but it also resulted in many celebrity parents demanding privacy especially for raising their children in a normal childhood.
To conclude, it is fair to summarise that although some stories covered through the eyes of a camera lens are persuasive and inspiring; however, media industry need to be cognizant of the consent of the personalities being filmed. Privacy is a fundamental right for all and should be well regarded and boundaries around the same be respected well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in general, as a result, in most cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72906202853 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564171122995 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.2454947186 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.357142857 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170560356479 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560747964894 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537267704741 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109662434034 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607658335583 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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